Splintered

November 6, 2001, 4:15 pm

Frozenby aword,Bitteris this frost.Splinteredis my heartShattered,I amlostFrozento the coreBitteris the costSplinterednow I lieShatteredI amlostCopyright soulsease 2001Every new beginning comes from...

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Re: Splintered

November 6, 2001, 4:18 pm

ouch .... ouch .... ouch .... a feeling I know .... and not a good place to be, soulsease .... sounds like you need a hug ... HUG ... whether you write of love or pain or anything in between ... you...

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Re: Splintered

November 6, 2001, 4:22 pm

OMG!!!! .............somebody give me some glue!!........ QUICK!!! ........we'll get ya fixed right up soulsease, just hope I glue the pieces back into the right places? ........*sorry just being...

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Re: Splintered

November 6, 2001, 6:06 pm

I can only imagine what that word is.. but no matter how little words you have used.. the emotions behind this poem are tremendous.. heartbreaking..hugs,InnerSpirit"wounds of the injured do not...

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Re: Splintered

November 6, 2001, 6:53 pm

i like the short lil phrases..i think they strengthen the poem..good read Tyler -----------------------------------"Life Is Too Good To Waste"-----------------------------------My Board..Post whatever...

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Re: Splintered

November 6, 2001, 7:53 pm

soulsease, now you're just breaking my heart with these words, *hugs* ... strong writing.. JessicaA single battle lost, but not the warBut tomorrow's another dayand I'm thirsty anywaySo bring on the...

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Re: Splintered

November 7, 2001, 4:02 am

I think you've captured the essence of pain, Soul...*sigh*....I know this feeling so well.....Outstanding writing with a soulsease flair.....*S*....Scarhttp://community.webtv.net/SimplyScar/Scarlett

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Re: Splintered

November 7, 2001, 5:22 pm

OK, now I feel like a bit of a fraud... This was written with a certain garden in mind...picture this if you will...a garden planted in cottage garden style, that bursts with colour and scent all...

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Re: Splintered

November 7, 2001, 7:03 pm

With just a few brief words and excellent rhythm this poem speaks volumes. In my humble opinion, very well done.

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Re: Splintered

November 27, 2001, 2:45 pm

Thanks, Arline...much appreciated!Every new beginning comes from some other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The Maelstrom

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Re: Splintered

November 27, 2001, 5:05 pm

Great form, Souls!! Points driven home in highly dramatic and poetic fashion!! Great poem!! That Happy Chica Marcia Ellen

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Re: Splintered

November 28, 2001, 7:07 pm

Thank you, Happy! Every new beginning comes from some other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The Maelstrom

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Re: Splintered

August 5, 2002, 6:23 pm

wow...thats all i can say...this poem left me speechless...i think the way the "stanzas" were written gave the poem an impact. very well-written...thanks for a great read...

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